| Re: An incredible moment in my life (told in story format)
Thanks for the comments folks. I hope you do get the chance to read it. The story might go over some people's heads but I hope not. Let me know what you think of it if you do read it (warts & all please).
This was the first time I had written a story of any sort so I don't know how good or bad it is.
Give it me straight as you won't hurt my feelings. If it will improve the storyline so much the better.
John |